Pitch Feed Back

 With the completion of our pitch came some comments on ways we could improve or expand on our current ideas and some which praised our ideas. Here is some of the feedback we received:

•  The general idea should be expanded more as it is slightly underdeveloped. Consider a more interesting narrative.
• If filming on top of the Malvern Hills, we would need to consider weather conditions, getting equipment up the hills and also getting to the hills in the first place.
• Think about who will be driving when filming the vehicle shots.
• Revise target audience: Consider the JICNAR scale and its categories.
• The idea is fairly ambitious but would look very effective if done well.
• The idea sounds achievable with college equipment.
• Revise logistical arrangements (for example a drum kit may not be too difficult to transport in terms of our chosen location).
• Possibly add more action into the narrative.